Begging for a reply isn’t part of your job.
Writing clearly is.
You spend 30+ minutes drafting an email.
Then ghosted.
Your colleagues need you to:
– Say less, but say it clearly
– Sound like a peer, not a ping
– Ask a question, they can answer
Here are 9 plug-and-send templates you can use
(because your email shouldn’t need a debugger)
1️⃣ Saying no respectfully
❌ Don’t write:
“Sorry, I can’t help.”
✅ Instead write:
“Hi [Name],
Thank you for considering me for [request].
Unfortunately, I am currently focused on [priority], and will not be able to assist you immediately.
However, I suggest the following alternatives:
• [Alternative 1]
• [Alternative 2]
Please let me know if either of these works for you.”
2️⃣ Addressing A Mistake:
❌ Don’t write:
“I made a mess! It’s my bad”
✅ Instead write:
“Hi [Name],
I realised there was an issue with [specific error] in the recent [work/report/task].
I have already taken the following steps to resolve it:
• [Action 1]
• [Action 2]
The corrected version will be available by [time], and I will ensure that this issue is prevented in the future.
3️⃣ Giving A Feedback:
❌ Don’t write:
“This is so bad, do it from again from scratch”
✅ Instead write:
“Hi [Name],
Thank you for your work on [project].
I have reviewed it and wanted to provide the following feedback:
Strengths:
• [Point 1]
• [Point 2]
Areas for improvement:
• [Suggestion 1]
• [Suggestion 2]
If you would like to discuss this further, I’m happy to connect.
4️⃣ Sending A Weekly Update:
❌ Don’t write:
“This is all that happened over the week”
✅ Instead write:
Hi [Name],
Please find below a summary of my progress this week:
Achievements:
• [Achievement] → [Impact]
• [Milestone] → [Why it matters]
In Progress:
• [Project] → [Status and timeline]
Focus for next week:
• [Priority 1]
• [Priority 2]
Please let me know if there are any adjustments are needed.
5️⃣ Asking For An Introduction:
❌ Don’t write:
“Do you know anyone hiring on that team?”
✅ Instead write:
Hi [Name],
I am currently exploring opportunities in this team [specific team].
I was wondering if you could introduce me to someone within your network who may be able to assist.
Specifically, I’m looking to connect with individuals at:
• [Role 1]
• [Role 2]
If you need any additional information, I’d be happy to provide a brief introduction note.
(remaining 4, in the cheat sheet!)
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I don’t write emails from scratch anymore.
I turned them into templates I can access when needed.
No more digging through threads.
No more “where’s that link again?”
Just fast, clear, grown-up communication.
Email Like A CEO
